Story Spark Session
One-Time Story Analysis – Sharpen Your Manuscript with Expert Feedback
Stuck in revisions? Wondering if your story is ready for agents or publishers? Get clear, actionable feedback with my One-Time Story Analysis—a deep dive into your manuscript’s strengths and areas for growth, tailored to your goals.
What You Get:
✅ Big-Picture Assessment – Plot, pacing, character development, and marketability
✅ Voice & Authenticity Check – Does your story resonate? (Especially valuable for #OwnVoices & BIPOC narratives)
✅ Submission Readiness – Identify red flags that make agents pause
✅ Customized Next Steps – No vague notes—just a roadmap to your strongest draft
Perfect For:
Writers who’ve completed a draft but feel "too close" to judge it
Authors preparing for querying or self-publishing
Anyone needing professional eyes before investing in full edits
How It Works:
Send your manuscript (up to 1600 words).
Receive detailed feedback + a 30-minute call to discuss revisions.
Revise with confidence—or upgrade to full editing support.
Publishing shouldn’t be a guessing game. Let’s make sure your story stands out—for all the right reasons.
One-Time Story Analysis – Sharpen Your Manuscript with Expert Feedback
Stuck in revisions? Wondering if your story is ready for agents or publishers? Get clear, actionable feedback with my One-Time Story Analysis—a deep dive into your manuscript’s strengths and areas for growth, tailored to your goals.
What You Get:
✅ Big-Picture Assessment – Plot, pacing, character development, and marketability
✅ Voice & Authenticity Check – Does your story resonate? (Especially valuable for #OwnVoices & BIPOC narratives)
✅ Submission Readiness – Identify red flags that make agents pause
✅ Customized Next Steps – No vague notes—just a roadmap to your strongest draft
Perfect For:
Writers who’ve completed a draft but feel "too close" to judge it
Authors preparing for querying or self-publishing
Anyone needing professional eyes before investing in full edits
How It Works:
Send your manuscript (up to 1600 words).
Receive detailed feedback + a 30-minute call to discuss revisions.
Revise with confidence—or upgrade to full editing support.
Publishing shouldn’t be a guessing game. Let’s make sure your story stands out—for all the right reasons.
One-Time Story Analysis – Sharpen Your Manuscript with Expert Feedback
Stuck in revisions? Wondering if your story is ready for agents or publishers? Get clear, actionable feedback with my One-Time Story Analysis—a deep dive into your manuscript’s strengths and areas for growth, tailored to your goals.
What You Get:
✅ Big-Picture Assessment – Plot, pacing, character development, and marketability
✅ Voice & Authenticity Check – Does your story resonate? (Especially valuable for #OwnVoices & BIPOC narratives)
✅ Submission Readiness – Identify red flags that make agents pause
✅ Customized Next Steps – No vague notes—just a roadmap to your strongest draft
Perfect For:
Writers who’ve completed a draft but feel "too close" to judge it
Authors preparing for querying or self-publishing
Anyone needing professional eyes before investing in full edits
How It Works:
Send your manuscript (up to 1600 words).
Receive detailed feedback + a 30-minute call to discuss revisions.
Revise with confidence—or upgrade to full editing support.
Publishing shouldn’t be a guessing game. Let’s make sure your story stands out—for all the right reasons.